Finished Review

   HELLO EVERYONE! Soooo last time i was yapping but now everything is teeing together in a neat little bow. the amazing and super tactic Johanna gave magical feed back. She said the overall story was GREAT.... Well maybe not GREAT but you know what i mean right? But she also helped natality and she fixed a decent amount of thing related to her editing process. They also got ideas from thier friends which was cool but i also got review Form PEERS. Julian thought it was cool he helped scout out the orginal area. but for the most part his insight wasnt as good as i would have liked. So mostly people got alot more people than i did when it comes to understand how to improve but thats mainly on me right? Well i guess sadly thats all. SEE YALLLLLLLLLL LATER FOLKS. BE COOL AND STAY IN SCHOOLLL